Delta Crateris V - Revision history

Fyzixfighter: changing numbers to words (usually the convention for small numbers) and tweaking ring description - with the picture, can use a more simply worded description

2008-01-03T16:40:48Z

changing numbers to words (usually the convention for small numbers) and tweaking ring description - with the picture, can use a more simply worded description

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, 16 [[battle group]]s (each made of 14 ships) of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet~~: before~~ the Kohr-Ah win the Doctrinal Conflict, the ring is composed of 12 Dreadnought battle groups and 4 Marauder battle groups (the ~~Marauders~~ being ~~placed in~~ the ~~corners of a square inscribed in the circle), but after~~ the Kohr-Ah victory there are 12 Marauder battle groups and 4 Dreadnought battle groups, the latter being placed in the positions formerly occupied by Marauders.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, a ring of sixteen [[battle group]]s (each made of fourteen ships) of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Before the Kohr-Ah win the Doctrinal Conflict, the ring is composed of twelve Dreadnought battle groups and four Marauder battle groups, the Marauder groups being evenly spaced all along the ring. After the Kohr-Ah victory there are twelve Marauder battle groups and four Dreadnought battle groups, the latter being placed in the positions formerly occupied by Marauders.

	Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

Valaggar: added images

2008-01-03T14:18:07Z

added images

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, ~~several~~ [[battle group]]s of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, 16 [[battle group]]s (each made of 14 ships) of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet: before the Kohr-Ah win the Doctrinal Conflict, the ring is composed of 12 Dreadnought battle groups and 4 Marauder battle groups (the Marauders being placed in the corners of a square inscribed in the circle), but after the Kohr-Ah victory there are 12 Marauder battle groups and 4 Dreadnought battle groups, the latter being placed in the positions formerly occupied by Marauders.

			Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

			[[Image:Sa-MatraDefenseRing_BeforeKohr-AhVictory.png\|100px]] Before the Kohr-Ah victory

			[[Image:Sa-MatraDefenseRing_AfterKohr-AhVictory.png\|100px]] After the Kohr-Ah victory

Valaggar: wl

2007-12-18T13:55:25Z

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, several ~~battlegroups~~ of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, several [[battle group]]s of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

Fyzixfighter: small ce to clarify antecedent of "they" in following clause

2007-12-18T05:01:29Z

small ce to clarify antecedent of "they" in following clause

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, several battlegroups of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious ~~against the Kzer-Za~~ in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, several battlegroups of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

Fyzixfighter: fixing some of the planet data and info on guards

2007-12-18T03:31:20Z

fixing some of the planet data and info on guards

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=1.23\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=0.95\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.36\|weather=None\|day=1.18\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=2\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious against the Kzer-Za in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, several battlegroups of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious against the Kzer-Za in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

Fyzixfighter: fleshing out - not sure if the planet data is correct & could use some comments about guards (I can't play game at the moment to check)

2007-12-17T20:44:05Z

fleshing out - not sure if the planet data is correct & could use some comments about guards (I can't play game at the moment to check)

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	~~The location~~ of the sa-~~matra~~		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=1.23\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=0.95\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.36\|weather=None\|day=1.18\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=2\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

			'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious against the Kzer-Za in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

66.67.140.220 at 23:38, 16 December 2007

2007-12-16T23:38:21Z

New page

The location of the sa-matra

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	{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}		{{PlanetBox\|name=Delta Crateris V\|image=RaceBox Missing Image.png\|caption=Planet which the Sa-Matra orbits\|orbit=8.17\|mass=2.04\|atmo=Vacuum\|radius=1.11\|temp=-186\|gravity=1.65\|weather=None\|day=0.65\|tectonics=Class 8\|tilt=14\|sat=1 satellite (the [[Sa-Matra]])\|type=[[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]]}}

	'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, ~~several~~ [[battle group]]s of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet. Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.		'''Delta Crateris V''' is a [[List of planet types#Magma\|Magma World]] and the fifth planet in the [[Delta Crateris]] star system. During the second [[Doctrinal Conflict]] between the [[Ur-Quan Kzer-Za\|Kzer-Za]] and the [[Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah\|Kohr-Ah]], the [[Sa-Matra]] is kept in orbit around this planet. As such, 16 [[battle group]]s (each made of 14 ships) of [[Dreadnought]]s and [[Marauder]]s guard it, preventing any non-[[Ur-Quan]] from approaching the planet: before the Kohr-Ah win the Doctrinal Conflict, the ring is composed of 12 Dreadnought battle groups and 4 Marauder battle groups (the Marauders being placed in the corners of a square inscribed in the circle), but after the Kohr-Ah victory there are 12 Marauder battle groups and 4 Dreadnought battle groups, the latter being placed in the positions formerly occupied by Marauders.

			Should the Kohr-Ah be victorious in the conflict, they will proceed in their [[Death March]] before returning to this planet to claim the Sa-Matra.

			[[Image:Sa-MatraDefenseRing_BeforeKohr-AhVictory.png\|100px]] Before the Kohr-Ah victory

			[[Image:Sa-MatraDefenseRing_AfterKohr-AhVictory.png\|100px]] After the Kohr-Ah victory